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2023年9月16日托福寫作機(jī)經(jīng),真題解析
時間：2023-09-22
來源：網(wǎng)絡(luò)
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前面給大家匯總過2023年9月16日場托?？荚嚠?dāng)中閱讀、聽力等方面的機(jī)經(jīng)回顧，本期我們重點(diǎn)給大家從網(wǎng)上分享一下托福寫作部分的機(jī)經(jīng)回顧，包含了綜合寫作和獨(dú)立寫作兩個部分，也有解析，大家可以看看。
Writing 寫作
綜合寫作
閱讀：
最近發(fā)現(xiàn)某個海洋里的微生物具有眼睛（sea-dwelling microorganism’s eye），猜測眼睛的用途的幾個theory。
1）眼睛可能用于檢測并追蹤獵物，幫助微生物捕食。
2）幫助微生物找到陽光強(qiáng)度更高的地方，以吸收更多的太陽能。
3）用于瞄準(zhǔn)獵物，然后用某種方式捕獲它們，可能是使用觸角等。
聽力：
反駁
1. 與沒有眼睛的相關(guān)微生物相比，它們?nèi)匀豢梢猿晒ψ粉櫕C物。這可能意味著眼睛具有其他功能，而不是僅用于追蹤獵物。
2. 微生物的進(jìn)化研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，它們變得越來越不依賴陽光產(chǎn)生能量。因此，海洋微生物的復(fù)雜眼睛可能有其他功能，而不僅僅是吸收太陽能。此外，聽力認(rèn)為這種進(jìn)化與眼睛用于感知陽光的功能不合理。
3. 研究人員經(jīng)過仔細(xì)檢查后發(fā)現(xiàn)，這些眼睛無法很好地聚焦，因此無法提高對其他微小生物的刺穿準(zhǔn)確性。這表明眼睛可能無法用于瞄準(zhǔn)食物或確定獵物的位置。
獨(dú)立寫作
Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor's question.
In your response, you should do the following.
- Express and support your opinion.
- Make a contribution to the discussion in your own words.
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.
Doctor Achebe:
More and more, online shopping is becoming the primary way that many people obtain everyday goods. But what are the ramifications for the society in which we live? On the one hand, online shopping has advantages -for example, I can make a purchase without ever leaving my home. However, with fewer people shopping at local shops, in some places, these establishments are having a hard time competing. Do you think that online shopping is, on the whole, affecting society?
Paul:
I think that online shopping has had negative impacts on society. In my city, many local stores have shelves filled with various products that you can find in online stores. This has forced some of them to close down, which not only affects the amount of tax revenue generated in our local community but also impacts the number of job opportunities available to the community members.
Kelly:
It's unfortunate that some local stores are forced to close down, but that's the nature of competition. As consumers, we benefit greatly from online shopping due to lower prices. Even if I find a physical store that can compete with online sellers in terms of pricing, I am still likely to make the purchase online because it means I don't have to spend money on transportation to the store.
網(wǎng)上購物對社會的影響
Paul認(rèn)為是不好的
Kelly認(rèn)為是好的
立場：網(wǎng)上購物有積極影響
理由：促進(jìn)小微企業(yè)發(fā)展，對就業(yè)和經(jīng)濟(jì)有好處
